Kamikaze_Badger Posted December 16, 2005 Posted December 16, 2005 What is a Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arkadiy Posted December 16, 2005 Posted December 16, 2005 Great story, gave me something to read. And how old are you again? Because, and I don't mean any offense, but I hate people who try and be older than they are and never have a fun life as a kid. I heard you were like 15 or something so I said that. The story was good, but I have had heard similar things a million times now....people know this already, but this does not mean that fighting is always a bad thing.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kamikaze_Badger Posted December 16, 2005 Posted December 16, 2005 It's not a story, it's a compilation of events. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
silkster Posted December 16, 2005 Posted December 16, 2005 (edited) Nicely done KB, I hope you keep up this attitude, It'll keep you from ALOT of danger. But seriously I just let them talk until they touch me... then I'll pop them in the eye. Fist to fist, I hate ppl who fight with weapons (wuss!) Edited December 16, 2005 by silkster Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockeyrcks9901 Posted December 16, 2005 Posted December 16, 2005 Also...if anyone gets in a fight. Its Man to Man...none of the my group vs your group crap that I see teenagers doing now adays. Its rediculous. If you want to fight someone, you fight that person. Not the people they hag out with. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
spathalogic Posted December 16, 2005 Posted December 16, 2005 A man is a human with male genatalia... or so I'm told. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleeble Posted December 17, 2005 Posted December 17, 2005 (edited) Very insightful. But idiots like his father-in-law are the reasons I try not to waste my time dealing with other people. Sometimes being a misanthropic, anti-social introvert has its advantages. I wouldn't call myself a pacifist, but I try to avoid unnecessary conflicts. ...but sometimes I would just love to beat a person's face into mush. Edited December 17, 2005 by Bleeble Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkScorpion Posted December 17, 2005 Posted December 17, 2005 Did you write this just to write it, or is it an essay for school? If it's not for school, then it's great, but if it is for school, it needs more elaboration (invoke the senses some more, pull the reader into it) and rethink the intro and thesis. Starting the story out with a question isnt very powerful. None the less, it's still a great story, and an even greater moral. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kamikaze_Badger Posted December 18, 2005 Posted December 18, 2005 I wrote it just to write it. If it were for school, it would be much more revised. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
OptikaliLLusion Posted December 18, 2005 Posted December 18, 2005 Mm I like your ideas KB. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enyce2k9 Posted December 18, 2005 Posted December 18, 2005 badger should get a part in the bible... like in the new revisions or somthin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kamikaze_Badger Posted December 18, 2005 Posted December 18, 2005 I'm Wiccan though . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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