s1ick Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 Should there be a hyphen (dash) between "DFI" and "street" so it matches the URL? oo didnt spot that good shout. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tmod Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 little edit done again so you can see the rest of the toaster on top of the border and ive added in the cable going off of the screen. I am by no means a graphics person, But the screen width is set at 100% so the cord shouldn't really be seen. Also it might create a problem in that the screen will try and compensate and show a gap when it shouldn't. Tmod Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
s1ick Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 point taken. I cant see any borders on my screen so ill take it off. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
disturbed6dws Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 hello....i've refined my image a bit and changed out sign stylings.... tell me how you like it now and if it all seems good, I will add in the lettering on the sign edit: i made the sign stand out a bit more - people should know where they are Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
s1ick Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 ok played around a bit and made the board on the left blend in a bit more, took off the cable as its not gonna be seen anyways and made the toaster itself fit onto the header in full. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luc@z Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 hello....i've refined my image a bit and changed out sign stylings.... tell me how you like it now and if it all seems good, I will add in the lettering on the sign edit: i made the sign stand out a bit more - people should know where they are Not that my opinion will decide the winner here, but I like that sign a lot better! Edit: I just noticed the specs on the toaster. I'm guessing that those are still from the original file, but those stats are pretty weak these days. lol Perhaps an upgrade is in order? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
disturbed6dws Posted October 26, 2006 Posted October 26, 2006 Not that my opinion will decide the winner here, but I like that sign a lot better! Edit: I just noticed the specs on the toaster. I'm guessing that those are still from the original file, but those stats are pretty weak these days. lol Perhaps an upgrade is in order? thnx...im just waiting to see whether i need to refine it some more or not - thnx though Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DuTcH Posted October 26, 2006 Posted October 26, 2006 can I get some constructive criticism too:D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
t_ski Posted October 26, 2006 Posted October 26, 2006 DuTcH, would you be able to put yours up with the menu bar? It would be nice to see how it all fits together. The only things I can suggest are about the tach. It seems like the needle is off-center, too far too the left. Also, with the bright white in it, it seems more prominent than the Toaster. From what I've seen here the Toaster needs to be a main focal point. Just my $.02... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
wingspar Posted October 26, 2006 Posted October 26, 2006 hello....i've refined my image a bit and changed out sign stylings.... tell me how you like it now and if it all seems good, I will add in the lettering on the sign edit: i made the sign stand out a bit more - people should know where they are Well, I just looked at this page in this thread, so haven’t looked at what anyone else has done, but I like this. My one comment, and I know Happy wants that toaster there, is that the florescent green of the toaster just doesn’t go with the rest of the logo of the color scheme of Speedfire. I wonder how he would feel about changing the florescent green to a florescent orange, or another color that fits the rest of the logo and the Speedfire Theme. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angry_Games Posted October 26, 2006 Posted October 26, 2006 hey guys i apologize, i been super busy since last night, and will be for a little longer, but I will return and critique everything from where I left off still plenty of time left so don't panic, and if others critique then listen to their opinions and keep working (you don't have to like or do what they suggest, you just have to listen and keep an open mind) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PlummetingFool Posted October 26, 2006 Posted October 26, 2006 Brand new here and happened to notice this thread straight off...I don't own a DFI board yet but I plan to get one in the near future. In the meantime lets see what I can do with this logo... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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