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#1 Onion

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 11:36 AM

My dad's got a couple businesses online, and he'd like some feedback on his newest site, so I thought I'd put it up here. Let me know what you think. Thanks in advance to anyone who helps us out.

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 11:49 AM

Looks like a fairly standard e-Commerce site. Didn't notice anything bad.

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 11:50 AM

That's your dad's website? Not your mom's?

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 11:57 AM

Looks pretty good. In my browsers, FF and Chrome on Mac OS X, some of the images of bottles have the small dots and heart over the top of them.

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I don't know if it's supposed to look like that but I think it looks odd.

Also, why is there a customer account page, the "Man Compte" link if the user hasn't logged in yet, which is done with the "Connexion" link. I just checked, and the "Mon Compte" link takes you to the login page. Seems redundant and I'd change it.
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Posted 15 November 2012 - 12:10 PM

Spam,? Account hacked ?

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 12:12 PM

That's your dad's website? Not your mom's?


One of his businesses, and one of my mom's shopping sites. :lol:

Looks pretty good. In my browsers, FF and Chrome on Mac OS X, some of the images of bottles have the small dots and heart over the top of them.

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I don't know if it's supposed to look like that but I think it looks odd.

Also, why is there a customer account page, the "Man Compte" link if the user hasn't logged in yet, which is done with the "Connexion" link. I just checked, and the "Mon Compte" link takes you to the login page. Seems redundant and I'd change it.


I'm not too sure if the dots and hearts are supposed to be like that, but that's how they are for me. I'll talk to him about it, and maybe recommend he stack them and put them off to the side a bit.

I'll look at the customer thing you mentioned, and I'll also mention that to him. Thanks man.

Spam,? Account hacked ?


Nope, just asking about his site. :lol:

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 12:19 PM

Mobile site looks professional, although menu could be a little glitchy at times, or it could just be my phone being really slow :lol:

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 12:23 PM

*goes over some pictures*

*sample image with payment methods* xD
well for so far on clicking on payment options :P

you should remove the dots and hearts, it doesnt fit. or you make the background transparant (tiff files preferable, easy done in photoshop, but then again, you can make the whole site layout in photoshop ;))

i find the twitter/facebook on the sides quite random and annoying, put em on the top, and to put the fb and twitter logo on the bottom and on the left, isnt that a bit overkill? :P
i would remove the fb and twitter logo's on the bottom and just put them on the top (or somewere else, you got plenty of space :P), if you were planning on keeping it.


on the design in general, its a bit bland and it is lacking personality, try some more pink in it(logo colors), put some color in it, that way you are giving the eyes more to see and people pay more attention to the site then the white blur it is now :P
also take note that the site tends to load slow, compaired to other sales sites with images, try to clean the code up a bit and reduce the amount of pictures


just my 2 cents, a graphic designer from holland :)

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 12:24 PM

Flare, I just checked other major sites like Newegg, they have the My Account link, even if you're logged out. I think its better that way, because you get redirected once you log in, instead of having to log in and then go to my account.

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 12:28 PM

*goes over some pictures*

*sample image with payment methods* xD
well for so far on clicking on payment options :P

you should remove the dots and hearts, it doesnt fit. or you make the background transparant (tiff files preferable, easy done in photoshop, but then again, you can make the whole site layout in photoshop ;))

i find the twitter/facebook on the sides quite random and annoying, put em on the top, and to put the fb and twitter logo on the bottom and on the left, isnt that a bit overkill? :P
i would remove the fb and twitter logo's on the bottom and just put them on the top (or somewere else, you got plenty of space :P), if you were planning on keeping it.


on the design in general, its a bit bland and it is lacking personality, try some more pink in it(logo colors), put some color in it, that way you are giving the eyes more to see and people pay more attention to the site then the white blur it is now :P
also take note that the site tends to load slow, compaired to other sales sites with images, try to clean the code up a bit and reduce the amount of pictures


just my 2 cents, a graphic designer from holland :)


Awesome advice, thanks man. :cheers:

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 12:30 PM

Awesome advice, thanks man. :cheers:


will keep this thread in mah favourites to watch the prgress, (if you post that ofcourse)
looking foward to the final version :)

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Posted 15 November 2012 - 12:34 PM

Yeah, I'll post it. :) I got a reply from my dad, he said:

making a lot of sens
c'est ce que j'ai demande a mon designer : plus de couleurs, degager le FB TW etc
enfin il a raison
merci fils


Or in English...

Makes a lot of sense. Its what I asked my designer, more colors, getting rid of the FB and Twitter, etc. This guy is right. Thanks son.


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